Sunday, April 18, 2010

Water

Water

Odorless;
Colorless;
Tasteless;
Spiritless,
But no,
It has
A spirit
After all;
Lifeless,
It gives
To life
Therefore
Living;
Selfless,
Loving
Not caring
About it's
Own self;
Human emotion
Teardrops;
Nature's morning
Dewdrops
And beautiful
Raindrops;
Why can't people be more like water?

The title was inspired by Kat's poems Wave, Wind, and Shadow.

4 comments:

  1. yay! i inspired that 1! it's good............

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  2. ^-^ Thanks, it was a one minute poem (HA-HA IN YOUR FACE GRAMMAR! I BET NO ONE NOTICE THAT I DIDN'T USE "an")

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  3. i do wish people can be more like water. sometimes. but then they wouldn't have nice hearts. or bad ones.

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